英文の添削をお願いします。

下記の英文の添削をお願い致します。

When I got up in the morning,I felt srtange atomoshere.
I noticed my oclock aram did not go off.I had to go now.
but I wanted to have a breakfast.I asked by myself what sholud I do.
I made a decition I have a breakfast puickly.
If I skip a breakfast,I feel bad and somthing happen during a class.
so I think my decition was correct.
As a result,I could get to the school on time.

Morning class
I studied about a fairlytale especially little red riding hood .
the fairytale is called AKAZUKINTOOOKAMI in Japan.
first,I talked about the import of this story in own country.
Among stories is a little different.
Second,We listened to another story on youtube
I tell you about the story of summary.

When The wolf hanged on in forest,he finded one house which a grandmather live.He is hugrry so he tyied to eat her.He came into her house and eat her up!He knew a liitle girl is coming.He waited for her in the house.

A littl girl came into the house and met him.She did not realized he is wolf.she said,What great big eyes you have.He replied,All the better to see you with.

but she came up with idea he has cool fury so I want the fury.
she has guns and shout him.He was dead.

She made a fury coat out of wolf slkin.
She said,Hell,and do please note my lovely furry coat.


I finished made up a story.
but I worked with classmate that she ignored to me.
I could not stand over again but I can not be helped.
I think I am the worst level in this class.I can not speak English very well.


Evening class
We talked about heart.
I think It is difficult to explain heart.It is depend on person.
but We couled talk about having heart ot heart.

After school
I went to the Oxford Circe which is famous for shopping road.
I bought some underwear which is Small size and a T-shirts,
I was filld up satisfaction.

At dinner
My host mother told me about a tommorow's dinner.
A familly is going to come home at dinner time and have a dinner with us.
I feel complax and better at the same time.
I can talk person who is diffrent usual but I do not have confedence.
I think I lose my confidence tomorrow.

No.1 ベストアンサー 回答者： enna2005 回答日時： 2011/06/01 13:10

スペルの間違いが多数あります。

過去形などの変化も（スペルと言うより変化した単語そのものが）間違いが多いです。
breakfast,lunch,dinner　は　形容詞と伴わないときは　冠詞は付けなくていいです。
I asked myself、 by　は不要です。

２段落目は何を言おうとしているのはわかりにくいです。（和文がないため）

単語のスペルと変化については辞書で確認することにして、和文も付けて、２，３回に分けて
添削希望を出されることをオススメします。

長い、スペルミス多数、和文がない、の点で見当を付けながら読み進むのが困難に感じてしまうので・・・
失礼、ごめんなさい。

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お礼日時：2011/06/16 07:04