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よろしくお願いします。

[拡散希望]被災者のために、下着・靴下などの無償提供をしてくださる企業様を探しております。
手を挙げてくださる企業様には当方団体名等々含め、責任者より詳しくお話しさせていただきます。
日本の企業ではもうまかなえない状態です。
ご協力お願いします。


[spread hope] for the　Japanese victims, we are looking for companies to provide free of you to the socks and underwear.
companies to raise their hands, including our corporate name and so on, I will talk more responsible.
The Japanese company is the state afford anymore.
Thank you for your cooperation.

No.1 ベストアンサー 回答者： cbm51910 回答日時： 2011/03/30 00:50

[spread hope] on behalf of the Japanese victims, we are searching for companies that would provide socks and underwear free of charge.

We will disclose the name of our organization to those who are interested in helping, and the person in charge will give you more details.
The Japanese companies cannot handle anymore.
Thank you for your cooperation.

この回答へのお礼

すみません、早々の回答なのに…
140文字を超えてるそうです。211文字…。
どうしたらいいでしょうか。

お礼日時：2011/03/30 01:01

No.3 回答者： cbm51910 回答日時： 2011/03/30 06:34

更に削ぎ落としたバージョンです。

[spread hope] we are searching for companies willing to provide free socks and underwear for the Japanese victims.
We will contact those interested, for details.
The Japanese companies can't handle anymore.
Thanks for your help.

この回答へのお礼

大変申し訳ありません。何度も作っていただいたのに…。
わたしのミスです。

例えば上の文章でしたら、88文字かと思ったら、「88文字オーバー」でした。
2つに分けて投稿する方法を考えて使わせていただきます。

お心遣い感謝です。

お礼日時：2011/03/30 08:24

No.2 回答者： cbm51910 回答日時： 2011/03/30 01:12

ANo.1です。

[spread hope] for the Japanese victims, we are searching for companies that would provide free socks and underwear.
We will disclose the name of our organization to those who are interested in helping, and the person in charge will give you more details.
The Japanese companies cannot handle anymore.
Thank you for your cooperation.

これでもだめなら、以下はどうでしょう。

[spread hope] for the Japanese victims, we are searching for companies that would provide free socks and underwear.
We will disclose who we are to those interested, and the person in charge will contact you.
The Japanese companies cannot handle anymore.
Thank you for your help.