自己表現

Why do you study English?という質問に対する答えを自分なりにいろいろ考えてみました。添削をお願いします。

1.Because it's fun.
2. Because I take an English test.
3. Because I play soccer in the future.
4. Because I want to trip the overseas.
5. Because I want to go to overseas in the future.
6. Because I will go to overseas.
7. Because I make friends in the world.
8. Because I will speak English.
9. Because I speak English with my friends.
10. Because for my future.

また、What are you going to do tonight?
という質問にI will play the piano. と答えることはできますか？
たくさんあってすみませんが、いろいろ覚えたいのでよろしくお願いします。

No.1 回答者： voni 回答日時： 2013/07/12 08:21

オーストラリア人です。

添削してみました。（変えた言葉を大文字にしました。）

1.Because it's fun.
2. Because I WANT TO take an English test.
3. Because I WANT TO play soccer in the future.
4. Because I want to GO ON AN OVERSEAS TRIP.
5. Because I want to go overseas in the future.
6. Because I will go overseas.
7. Because I WANT TO make friends WITH PEOPLE FROM (OVERSEAS/OTHER COUNTRIES).
8. Because I WANT TO speak English.
9. Because I speak English with my friends.
10. For my future.

ご参考になりましたら幸いです。