大学院 英作文

大学院入試問題の英作文の添削お願いします。
（日本語の部分は分かりませんでした）

Taro:Im tired when Im in house.
Fumiko:Shall we go shopping?We have used vegetables such as Japanese radish and egg apple ,and I want to buy calamarys and
fishes and go to bottle shop or drug shop.
Taro:Oh,The store which located near the station sold a personal
computer.I want it.
Fumiko:If you want ,you can also buy it around here.
Taro:(近所では高すぎるよ。) You can buy electronic products such as microwave or air conditioner at popular prices.
Fumiko:But,Your room is a mess,so you cannot　place personal computer.
Taro:The vacuum cleaner was sold at popular price.

No.1 回答者： kingdom107 回答日時： 2007/07/09 18:10

自分も英語が完璧なわけではないのですが、できるだけ手伝いをさせてもらいます。

Taro: It's boring to stay in a house.
Fumiko: Well then let's go shopping. We have used all vegetables such as Japanese radishes (またはDaikon) and eggplants, and I would like to buy some squid and fish. I also like to stop by at a liquor store and a drugstore.
Taro: Oh, and there is a computer on sale at the store in front of the trainstation. I want to get it.
Fumiko: If you want to buy a computer, you don't have to go that far.
Taro: Computers are expensive around here. And we can buy any kind of electric products such as microwaves or air conditioners in a reasonable price range.
Fumiko: But your room is already in a mess. There is no place to put a computer.
Taro: Oh yeah, vacuums were also cheap.

nagihonoさんの英語ではArticle "a" や "the" などを気をつけてください。それから、単数なのか複数なのか。その単語は複数形にできるのか。（Fishは複数形もFishです) Egg appleは聞いたことがないのですが、ナスはEggplantと言うのがアメリカでは主流です。

この回答へのお礼

ありがとうございました。参考にさせていただきます

お礼日時：2007/07/09 18:33