この英文で正しいでしょうか？

Is there any left-handed person here?
Lefty have a good visual skills or imagine layouts. Mozart/ Picasso/ Leonardo da Vinci/ Michelangelo/ 　All of them are lefty.

Thanks to my parent’s effort, I am now being able to do with both hands.
Writing, eating are with my right-hand.
I usually play tennis with my left hand, But if a ball comes to my right side,
I immediately change my racket and can return a ball. Can you believe it?
It’s truth. but a few times.
Someday I’ll be able to cut a cucumber during writing a letter.
人前で発表しますがネイティブに通じるかが心配です。
省略していますので文章としては変ですが、文法的な大きな誤りをご指摘ください。

No.1 ベストアンサー 回答者： Him-hymn 回答日時： 2013/02/07 02:27

Is there any left-handed person here?

Lefties are said to be skillful and imaginative.
Mozart, Picasso, Leonard da Vinci, Michelangelo, all of these great people were lefty.
My parents made me use my right hand for writing and eating. I really appreciate this.
I usually play tennis with my left hand, but if a ball comes to my right side,
I immediately grip my racket with my right hand, and can return a ball. Can you believe this?
It’s true, and this happens from time to time.
Some day I　may be able to cut a cucumber with my left hand while writing a letter with my right hand.

面倒なので文章を直しておきました。構成はそのままで文法的にまずいところを修正しました。

この回答へのお礼

ありがとうございました。
大変助かりました。

このような洗練された文章をサクッと書けるようこれからも頑張ろう！
というＦｉｇｈｔがわいてきました。

ご多忙なところありがとうございました。感謝です。

お礼日時：2013/02/07 09:40