天神祭りを英語で

添削してください。

I took part in Tenjin festival.
I went there sevraltime but I took the ship in my first.
Osaka jime is the Osaka style of salutation.
ここが全然作れない(*ノД｀)ノ：.*：.。.：
I had a wonderful time.

天神祭りに参加しました。
何回か行った事はあったのですが、船に乗って祭りに参加したのは初めてでした。
船渡御では、船と船がすれ違うたびに行われる大阪じめ。
身近で見る花火。
とっても楽しかったです。ヽ(´∀`*)ノ ギャーイ♪

No.5 ベストアンサー 回答者： mabomk 回答日時： 2007/07/31 14:35

三番四番です。

花火も付け加えて、内容も少し修正しての再提出です。

First in my life I took part in Tenjin festival several days ago.
This time I put myself on board the festival boat, though I
have ever seen the boats cruising more than several time.

Every time two boats approached each other, those all on
board made an traditional-style handclap in Osaka-jime by
turns to celebrate the festival each other.

We all were impressed by the splendid fireworks displayed on
the nearby river banks.

It was really wonderful experience for me.

No.4 回答者： mabomk 回答日時： 2007/07/31 13:34

あっ、三番ですっ、「花火のこと」書くの忘れてしもた。

堪忍したってね、ね?。他のお答えを参考にして。

この回答へのお礼

関西の人なんだぁｗ

お礼日時：2007/08/02 00:09

No.3 回答者： mabomk 回答日時： 2007/07/31 13:31

こんなもんどないでっしゃろうか? だいぶ情景(心情も)まで描いてみましたが。

First in my life I took part in Tenjin festival several days ago.
This time I put myself on board the festival boat, though I
have ever seen the boats cruising more than several time.

When two boats are approaching, those all on board made an
traditional-style handclap in Osaka-way, so-called
Osaka-jime, to celebrate the festival each other.

It was really wonderful time (or, experience) for me.

No.2 回答者： longrain 回答日時： 2007/07/31 07:59

I joined Tenjin Festival.

I had been to the festival several times, but it was the first time to join the festival on a boat.

In the ritual of Funatogyo (parades of two flotillas), everyone on the boats made handclaps as a greeting when the flotillas came and went.
　
It was really exciting to watch fireworks close.

I had a wonderful time.

No.1 回答者： louvrebear 回答日時： 2007/07/31 01:09

It participated in the Tenjin festival.

It was the first time to participate in the festival taking the ship though had been several times.
Osaka done in ship proceeding whenever ship passes with ship.
Fireworks seen near oneself.
It was very happy.