英検2級のライティングの添削をお願いしたいです。

質問
Some people say that students should spend more time learning foreign languages. Do you agree with this opinion?


私の回答

I think that students should spend I more time learing foreign languages.

I have two reasons to support this opinion.
The first reason is that it isuseful and important to do in the future. For example, if we wanted to go abroad we have to study and speak foreign language.

The second reason is that we can

help foreign people. For instance,

when we were

talked to foreign people

in the city, we can explain about

many things.

For these reasons that I explained above, I think that students should spend more time learning foreign
language.

色々アドバイスあったら、よろしくお願いします。

No.1 回答者： grouse2020 回答日時： 2024/01/09 13:25

agree かどうか訊かれているので、まずは、Yes/No を答えましょう。

その後で、自分の意見を言います。
そうしないと、質問した方は、イライラします。