英語になおしてください！

２月くらいに、外国人に話す機会があるんですけど、なんでもいいから自分の～みたいなことを話くださいと言われました。
もし良ければ英語になおしてください

『
私はお気に入りの食べ物について話します。
みなさんは、ラーメンをしっていますか？たぶん、しらない人はいないですよね？
私はラーメンが食べ物の中で一番大好きで。
なかでも〇〇店のラーメンが一番大好きです。
なぜなら、味はもちろん、見た目も最高だからです。
でも、あまり食べ過ぎるとよくないですし、スープを飲み干すのも良くないです。
だから、食べ過ぎには気をつけています。
私はもっと県外のおいしいラーメン屋に行って食べ歩いてみたいですね！

ぜひ〇〇店にいってみてください。
ご清聴ありがとうございます。』


　　　　　　　　　までが英語に直してくれたらさいわいです。

おねがいします。

No.3 ベストアンサー 回答者： sayshe 回答日時： 2013/02/04 00:14

＃１．です。

コピペに失敗しました。冒頭の1文が抜けています。

I am going to talk about my favorite food.
Do you know ramen? Probably there is no one that does not know ramen.
I like ramen best of all kind of food.
Above all, I love the ramen served at ○○.
It is because it looks best as well as it tastes best.
However, it is not good to overeat it. Nor is it good to drink up its broth.
So I am careful not to overeat it.
I would like to try good ramen in other prefectures.
Be sure to try ramen at ○○.
Thank you for listening.

にして下さい。失礼しました。

No.2 回答者： d-y 回答日時： 2013/02/04 00:08

I will talk about my favorite food.

Does everyone know ramen? I think the answer is probably yes.

Of all foods in the world, I like ramen best.
And of all ramen in the world, I like ○○'s ramen best.
As you can imagine, it really tastes good.
But that's not all. It also looks really really good.

Having said that, eating too much ramen isn't good -- too many calories.
Consuming all soup in the bowl isn't good, either -- too much sodium.
I always try to be careful not to eat too much.

I am hoping to visit good ramen restaurants in other prefectures to eat their ramen.

So, please go to ○○ and try their ramen. You won't be sorry for that.

Thank you for your attention. Thank yo.

No.1 回答者： sayshe 回答日時： 2013/02/03 23:23

Do you know ramen? Probably there is no one that does not know ramen.

I like ramen best of all kind of food.
Above all, I love the ramen served at ○○.
It is because it looks best as well as it tastes best.
However, it is not good to overeat it. Nor is it good to drink up its broth.
So I am careful not to overeat it.
I would like to try good ramen in other prefectures.
Be sure to try ramen at ○○.
Thank you for listening.