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The report describes the other elements that have proved to be vital: a single, powerful national AIDS plan involving a wide range of actors; social openness, increasing the visibility of the epidemic and countering stigma; social policies that address core vulnerabilities; the engagement of all sectors (not just health); a recognition of the synergy between prevention and care; support to community participation; and targeting interventions to those who are most vulnerable, including young people before they become sexually active. Countries that have adopted forward-looking strategies to fight the epidemic are reaping the rewards in the form of falling incidence

No.1 回答者： ohioan4506 回答日時： 2012/01/25 01:35

The report describes the other elements [that have proved to be vital]:

このレポートで、重要だと証明している他の要素に関して述べている。それらは、

a single, powerful national AIDS plan involving a wide range of factors(　>actorsではなく）;

広範囲の要因を含めた、一つの強力な国家（レベル）のAIDS計画

social openness, increasing the visibility of the epidemic and countering stigma;
社会的開放と、（AIDSの）まん延の認知の増大、偏見への対抗

social policies that address core vulnerabilities;
中核となる脆弱性に対応する社会政策

the engagement of all sectors (not just health);
（ただ単に健康だけでなく）すべての分野のかかわり

a recognition of the synergy between prevention and care;
予防と治療間の相互作用の認識

support to community participation;
コミュニティ参加の支持

and targeting interventions to those [who are most vulnerable, including young people before they become sexually active].
性行動前の若い人たちも含めた、もっとも弱い立場にある人たち（への介入）に目標を定めること

Countries [that have adopted forward-looking strategies to fight the epidemic
are reaping the rewards in the form of falling incidence
このまん延と闘う前向きな戦略をとった国々は、この出来事（AIDSのまん延）の減少という形で成果を得ている。