文法的におかしなところはありますか？

Hello,I interviewed Mari,about her 's dream. She want to be an Illustrator,becaose
she likes to draw picture. She thinks wanto to be an Illustrator since 4 years.
She long to become an Illustrator's Yuhushi.
She often drew picture to person. She likes paint person betterthan person anima,
but it is difficult for she to drow landscape.

スペルは多々間違えてると思います

No.1 ベストアンサー 回答者： Willyt 回答日時： 2011/11/23 17:39

her's → her

want → wants
to draw picture → painting または to draw pictures
thinks wanto → hopes
Illustrator → an illustrator
4 years → four years ago
Illustrator's → illustrator
picture to person →figure paintings
person anima → animated figures
for she → for her
landscape → landscapes

他にあるかも・・・。

この回答へのお礼

たくさんありますね！

助かりました！

ありがとうございます！！

お礼日時：2011/11/23 17:43

No.2 回答者： marbleshit 回答日時： 2011/11/23 17:48

Hello, I have interviewed Mari about her dream. She wants to be an illustrator, because she likes drawing pictures. She has kept thinking that she wanted to be an illustrator since she was 4.

She longs to become an illustrator's Yuhushi.
She often draws a picture of persons. She likes to paint a person better than a person's anima but it is more difficult for her than to draw landscapes.