自然な英訳の添削をお願い致します。

自然な英訳の添削をお願い致します。
手直しいただけたらありがたいです。


・いつもニコニコしてくれてありがとう
→thank you for your everytime smile
・スポンジボブの顔真似して、楽しませてくれてありがとう
→thank you for making me laugh to immitate "Sponge Bob".

・フランスの料理作ってくれてありがとう
→thank you for cooking French.

・病気の時看病してくれてありがとう
→thank you for nursing me when i caught a cold

・破れた服を縫ってくれてありがとう
→thank you for sewing my clothes

・フルーツジュースありがとう
→thank you for making fruit juice

・短気だけど、最後はいつも許してくれて
→thank you for your mercy even you are hottemper

・将棋やチェスを覚えてくれて
→thank you for trying to learn chess to play with me

・私の早起きを我慢してくれて
→thank you for enduring to my early rising

・試験の時のエール
→thank you for cheering me up when i had exam

どうぞ宜しくお願い致します。

No.2 ベストアンサー 回答者： Him-hymn 回答日時： 2013/06/04 19:53

日本語の意味を損なわないように訳します。

→thank you for your everytime smile
　Thank you for smiling at me all the time.

→thank you for making me laugh to immitate "Sponge Bob".
　Thank you for making me laugh by immitating "Sponge Bob."

→thank you for cooking French.
Thank you for cooking French food for me.

→thank you for nursing me when i caught a cold
Thank you for nurising me while I was sick.

→thank you for sewing my clothes
Thank you for sewing up a rip in my clothes.

→thank you for making fruit juice
Thank you for making fruit juice.

→thank you for your mercy even you are hottemper
Thank you for your forgiveness even when I was hot-tempered.
　短気なのは自分ですよね？

→thank you for trying to learn chess to play with me
　Thank you for trying to learn chess and Japanese chess from me.

→thank you for enduring to my early rising
Thank you for letting me rise very early in the morning.

→thank you for cheering me up when i had exam
Thank you for cheering me up before I had my exam.

以上でいかがでしょうか？

No.3 回答者： oignies 回答日時： 2013/06/05 00:35

解答１のかたのでつうじますが、一問「将棋とチェスをおぼえてくれて」

がぬけていました。

将棋とチェスの部分の将棋を日本のチェスと訳せば通じると思います。

解答２のかたの答ですと、わたしから将棋とチェスをおそわってくれて
ありがとう、になってしまいます。

No.1 回答者： Dandanius 回答日時： 2013/06/04 19:19

参考になれば幸いです。

Thank you for being such a cheerful person.
Thank you for making me laugh with Spongebob imitations.
Thank you for cooking French cuisine for me.
Thank you for nursing me when I was sick.
Thank you for patching up my clothes for me.
Thank you for making me fruit juice
Thank you for always forgiving me in the end,despite your short temper.
Thank you for tolerating the fact that I'm an early riser,
Thank you for cheering me up during exams.