英語の訳をお願いします。

本当に英語が苦手なんですが頑張って訳しました。
正しいのか間違ってるのかすら分からず疲労困憊しております。
どなたかお優しい方、お力添え頂けますでしょうか。
日本語と英語のニュアンスが多少違っていいと思って訳したので、
英語の方に沿って直して頂ければ幸いです。
よろしくお願い致します。

覚えてる？　僕を怒ったあの日のことを
You remember?　Thing of that day, which was angry at me.

君は家の外まで追いかけて来たね
You've chased me up out of the house.

寝る前には下手くそな歌を歌ってくれた
you were sang me clumsy songs before going to bed for me.

本当はずっと起きてたんだ
Actually I was awake all the time.

最後まで聞いていたくて
Until end I wanted to have heard it.

あの日、こんな早くに君が眠りにつくと思わなかったよ
That day, I didn't think you so go to sleep early.


ねぇ　目を覚まして
Hey, Wake up. Pleas.

ちょっと早すぎるだろう
It's a little bit too early.

果たせてない約束がたくさんあるんだ
We have not accomplished lots of promises.

どうして？教えて欲しい、神様
Why? Tell me please, God.

もう会うことさえできないの？
I can't even meet her?

僕を見つめる眼差しにも　
And her look gaze at me.


僕らは自分のことで手一杯だ
We're up to the eyes in myself.

泣くし、怒るし、笑うし、恨み、叫ぶ
To cry, get angry, laugh, and hate, scream.

でもそれが人間だろう?
But that should be the human?

生きていくってことだろう
That must will live.

ただこれだけは約束するよ
I promise just this much.

聞いて欲しい
Listen to me, listen.


君が愛してくれたこの命を
This life you gave me love,

次の命に繋げたい
I want to connect it to the next life.

わからない、何が正解なのか
I don't know, What's the correct answer.

ただそれでも　君がしてくれたように
As you did me to do it,

僕も下手くそな歌を歌うよ
I sing clumsy songs too.

そして君の話しをして　そのまま一緒に眠るんだ
And I'll talk your story, as we sleep together.


何が正しいか分からない、こわいことだって考える
I don't know what is right, I think scary things too.

でも君の願いは僕が幸せに暮らすことだと言っていただろう
But you had said the your wish is I live in happiness.

それが君の生きた証　君と生きることの気がするから
That's your living proof, I feel that's live with you.

会いたいよ　愛してる
I miss you, love you.


君が愛してくれたこの命を
This life you gave me love,

次の命に繋げたい
I want to connect it to the next life.

わからない、何が正解なのか
I don't know, What's the correct answer.

ただそれでも　君がしてくれたように
As you did me to do it,

僕も下手くそな歌を歌うよ
I sing clumsy songs too.

そして君の話しをして　そのまま一緒に眠るんだ
And I'll talk your story, as we sleep together.


それが君の生きた証　君と生きることの気がするから
It is your living proof, I feel that's live with you.

何が正しいか分からない
I don't know what is right.

でも君の願いは僕が幸せに暮らすことだと言っていただろう
But you had said the your wish is I live in happiness.

これからもずっと一緒に叶えて欲しい
I want to that come true together forever.

会いたいよ　愛してる　君と永遠に一緒
I miss you. I love you, together forever with you.

No.2 回答者： tiptoe 回答日時： 2016/11/04 12:18

あくまでご参考程度に

Remember the day I made you so mad

You chased me out the door

Your bedtime songs weren't perfect at all

But I was awake the whole time

Wanted to listen through to the end

Never thought you'd fall into sleep so early that day

Hey wake up

Isn't it a bit too early

We still got so much to do together, like I promised.

How could I not see you anymore

Or the look in your eyes on me

We are just so tied up with ourselves

Crying, laughing, hating, screaming, getting upset

But that's how people are

That's how people live

Here's one thing I promise

I want you to listen

You loved me

I'll pass your love onto next newborns.

Don't know what's right

My bedtime songs wouldn't be perfect either

But I would do the same for him like you used to do

Then I'd tell him your story then we'd fall asleep together

I don't know what is right, I get scared sometimes

But you would always pray for my happiness

That's what you left me with, and I'll live with it

I miss you, I love you

May our prayers be heard forever

I miss you, I love you, I'm part of you indefinitely

No.1 回答者： daaa- 回答日時： 2016/11/02 09:34

感服しました。

済みません何も訂正するところ見つけることは出来ませんでした。

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