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QUESTION
Do you think it is difficult for Japanese people to learn to speak English?

I don't think it is difficult for Japanese people to learn tospeak English.
I have two reasons.
First, they have many English classes at school. Thus, they have a lot of chances speaking English.

Second, they can learning to speak English if they using Internet. For example, online lessons can speak to English teacher.

No.2 回答者： Quokka 回答日時： 2023/01/21 20:41

Do you think で始まる質問には、

そう思うなら、 Yes, I do.
思わないなら、No, I don't. か No, I don't think so.
で答えます。全文入れるのは冗長です。

No.1 回答者： ふぐちり 回答日時： 2023/01/21 19:42

Second 以前はOKですが、それ以降が壊滅してます。

①助動詞canの後ろは動詞なのでlearnです。
②if they の後に動詞がありません。useです。
③オンラインレッスンが先生に喋る？喋るのは生徒でしょう。
They can speak to English teachers in online lessons