学校の許可無くカラオケに行き、友達にジュースを持ってきてもらったことを英語で反省文なのですが、これで

学校の許可無くカラオケに行き、友達にジュースを持ってきてもらったことを英語で反省文なのですが、これでいいですか？

I went to karaoke without school permission and used poor people

No.2 ベストアンサー 回答者： 河内のおやじ 回答日時： 2024/03/08 13:45

これでは、ダメです。

下記の様にお願いします。

Dear [School Authority],

I am writing to express my sincere apologies for my recent actions that violated the school rules. I understand that going to karaoke and inviting friends, as well as bringing juice, were clear violations of the school regulations.

I realize now that my actions were irresponsible and disrespectful to the school community. I take full responsibility for my behavior and understand the importance of adhering to the rules set forth by the school.

I assure you that this incident has served as a wake-up call for me, and I am committed to making better choices in the future. I understand the consequences of my actions and am willing to accept any punishment deemed appropriate.

Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience or disruption my actions may have caused. I am truly sorry and will strive to do better moving forward.

Sincerely,
[Your Name]

この回答へのお礼

どこがだめなんですか？

お礼日時：2024/03/08 13:57

No.1 回答者： stomachman 回答日時： 2024/03/08 13:40

(1) 行為の事実。

(2) どこがどうマズいのか。
(3) 今後どうするつもりなのか。

の3つが揃わなくては反省文じゃない。

この回答へのお礼

？

お礼日時：2024/03/08 13:58