英作文の採点よろしくお願いします My memory is not as good as that

英作文の採点よろしくお願いします
My memory is not as good as that I used to have.
It is said that youngers these days tend not to read as many books as they used to. However, regarding the fact that popular books these days are well sold, it can't be said immediately that youngers has come to hate readings. Youngers tend to be absorbed in what they are interested in.

No.1 ベストアンサー 回答者： Wungongchan 回答日時： 2020/09/24 17:16

However以降に文法的な間違いや使う単語に不自然なところがあるので以下を参考にしてください。

However, considering the fact that books by popular writers are well sold these days, it can't be concluded immediately that youngsters have come to hate reading. Youngsters are simply absorbed in what they are interested in.

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ありがとうございました

お礼日時：2020/09/24 17:37