仙台東について英語で紹介しなきゃいけないのですが、

仙台東について英語で紹介しなきゃいけないのですが、

途中まで書いて分からなくなりました・


この続きをどうすればいいでしょうか？
my school is sendai higashi high school.
there are english couse and general couse.
english couse is unusual.
my school is surrounded by natre.
there are many rice field.
we always feel the four seasons.
itis hard for us to go to school.
but i have never been happier.
this environment is the best for study and sport.

もしよければ添削もしていただきたいのですが・・

No.1 回答者： spring135 回答日時： 2010/08/18 11:45

まず大文字にすべきところを大文字にして、スペルのいい加減なところを正しく直すべきです。

相手を意識することが最も重要です。その相手に何を伝えたいかを箇条書きにして、優先順位をつけて上から3個ばかり選んで詳しく述べればいいでしょう。

No.2 ベストアンサー 回答者： nochi3 回答日時： 2010/08/18 12:52

Let me introduce our school.

The name of our school is Sendai Higashi Senior High School.
We are surrounded by nature,
We see many rice fields near here.
As we find some flowers and meet with a chance for harvest through a year, we can feel four seasons.
It is very quiet too. We don’t hear automobile noises.
In winter, it is hard for us to go to school for a lot of snows.
I have never been happier in winter.
But I think our environment is best for learning and doing sports
We have two courses in our school, one is English course and the other is General course.
I think our English course is unusual.
(We study reading stories in English, English composition, Speaking English and so n.)
(状況が把握できません。あしからず）
Students in general course study all subjects for entering university.
They will succeed in examinations in spring.

適当に作成しました。ご自分で確かめ勉強してね！