英語で何て言えばいいでしょうか？

『私は宮崎県で生まれ、１８歳まで宮崎で育ちました。
そして、高知大学に進学したので４年間高知県に住みました。
宮崎と高知の両方とも自然がいっぱいでいいところでした。
そして大学を卒業し２２歳で就職のため東京へ引越してきました。
東京にはもう１０年くらい住んでいます。
東京は何をするにも人がいっぱいなので少しストレスを感じます。
将来は田舎に帰ってのんびり暮らしたいです。』

この長文を英語にすると何て言えば良いでしょうか？
今後自己紹介で何度も使う表現だと思いますので暗記したいと思います。

教えてください。
よろしくお願いします。

一応自分で考えたものは以下です。
I was born in Miyazaki prefecture.
And I grew up in there until I was eighteen years old.
And I went on Kochi university.
The reason why I had lived in Kochi for four years.
Both Miyazaki and Kochi are nice place where there are a lot of nature.
And I graduated Kochi University when I was twenty two years old.
After that I transfered to Tokyo for work.
I have lived in Tokyo for 10 years around.
I sometimes feel not good in Tokyo because there are a lot of people in Tokyo.
You cant help avoiding crowded people for whatever you want to do.
I hope go to my back home in the future.

もっと他に良い言い方があれば教えてください。
よろしくお願いします。

No.1 ベストアンサー 回答者： SPS700 回答日時： 2012/12/13 09:35

I was born and raised in Miyazaki prefecture until eighteen, and went on to the Kochi university, where I stayed for four years.

There is a lot of nature left untouched in both Miyazaki and Kochi and I liked living there.

After graduation at twenty-two I moved to Tokyo for work, where I have been for the last ten years.

Tokyo is crowded and is sometimes stressful living there, so in the future I hope to go back to the country and enjoy a relaxed life.

とも。

　　　　そのままでも、よく書けていると思います。

No.2 回答者： sporespore 回答日時： 2012/12/13 10:03

I was born in Miyazaki prefecture and grew up there until eighteen years old.

After that I went on Kochi university.
The reason why I chose and lived there for four years is that both Miyazaki and Kochi are full of nature and nice place to live.
At an age of 22 I graduated from Kochi University and move to Tokyo to work.
Since then I have lived in Tokyo around 10 years or so.
There are a lot of people in Tokyo and I miss my home town sometimes.
I hope go to my back home in the future.

この文章は言う必要のないものともいます。最初から東京に住んでいる人もいますので・・・。
You cant help avoiding crowded people for whatever you want to do.
加えるとすれば・・・
It is not easy to avoid crowded people wherever I go in Tokyo.